Opposing Forces

Fanfiction
Title:	Opposing Forces
Author(s):	C.D.M.
Date(s):	1993
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Genre(s):	slash
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Relationship(s):	Kirk/Spock
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Opposing Forces is a K/S story by C.D.M.

It was published in the print zine Naked Times #30.

Summary

"While Kirk is split, his dark half goes to Spock and seduces/rapes him but after Kirkʼs halves are reunited he must find a way to repair his relationship with Spock and get him to see that the love they have for each other should continue."

Reactions and Reviews

Wolf-Kirk stirs Spock uncommonly ; he is powerless to use logic and resist. This powerlessness in Spock was done very well; I realty believed it. Wolf-Kirk says Lamb-Kirk is a weakling and coward for not revealing his desires to Spock. Wolf-Kirk mildly stuns Spock and forces ssx, 2nd S^cck car.t help but lev? it. Lamb-Kirk wrlks in on this. Hs watches transfixed, orgasming.

Some quite excellent moments. Fine erotic words - agony and ecstasy. An exquisite intensity, when two Kirk's eyes meet while the one is fucking Spock.

There were too marry incomplete sentences beginning with a "while" or "until" phrase without the corresponding other phrases, whatever that's called. Used sparingly this is acceptable and effective, but it was done often in this story.

Insightful characterization, expressed very well.